In the article “GPS Insight Can Meet ‘Out-of-The-Box’ Requirements”, it introduces the functionality, features, and benefits of GPS Insight, which primarily provides “asset and vehicle tracking solutions”. The main function of GPS Insight is to retrieve and relay back data collected to the user for analysis in real time. The article also stated that the features of GPS Insight are “configurable and customizable” according to the user’s requirements and preferences. To be able to meet user’s ever-changing demands and requests, GPS Insight introduces new features based on user’s response and feedback. Due to GPS Insight’s customizability, it can perform at different degrees of comprehensiveness, making it a versatile product.
Does GPS Insight meet ‘Out-of-The-Box’ requirements? It does to a large extend as GPS insight are designed to collect data fast and conveniently for users to access. Due to the world growing rapidly, GPS Insight collect data real time that users could be updated in an instant. It can perform at different degrees of comprehensiveness to meet the user’s constant changing demands and requests.
In an article on "The Evolution of Telematics" (Lauren Fletcher& Grace Suizo, February 2011). The usage of GPS in their product MARCUS Fleet Tracking solution (Lauren Fletcher & Grace Suizo, February 2011) collect productivity and utilization information. Besides reducing the costs incurred by fuel usage and cost, it also shortens the time frame when the vehicle is stationary. Keeping up with the technology trend, Users can access from either their computer, smartphone or any web accessible devices. Which will keep users constantly updated at a desired speed with the results they wanted.
One of the example this product could do is to be able to notify users by sending e-mails on a constant basis for important things. The waiting time and the speed of the vehicle. The MARCUS Speed Limit (Lauren Fletcher& Grace Suizo, February 2011), a real-time notifying function alerts the manager of the product and the user when the vehicle exceeds the speed limit when cruising along the expressway.
There maybe other products that wasnt mention here uses GPS in another creative way, but all of them serves the same purpose which is to make things convenient and to conform to the lifestyle users are living.
References:
GPS Insight (n.d.) Retrieved from www.gpsinsight.com
Lauren Fletcher & Grace Suizo (February 2011). The Evolution of Telematics. Retrieved from http://www.automotive-fleet.com/article/story/2011/02/the-evolution-of-telematics.aspx
Thanks for the effort, Boris. You do a decent job describing GPS Insight, but that description can be made clearer. After reading your product summary, I'm still not sure that I understand all "the functionality, features, and benefits of GPS Insight."
ReplyDeleteI also see that you focus on comparing GPS Insight with Marcus Fleet Tracking. But on what basis are you comparing? You need a sort of step by step comparison made for us readers to really grasp the differences.
As far as your organization goes, I also feel that your essay lacks focus because you don't present a clear stand. Ultimately, how do you think these two products compare? Which should I buy? Why?
Before you write your final draft, please look at the unit on outlining ideas. Your organization of ideas needs to be much clearer.
Here are other issues you need to review:
1) In the article “GPS Insight Can Meet ‘Out-of-The-Box’ Requirements”, it introduces the functionality, features, and benefits of GPS Insight, which primarily provides “asset and vehicle tracking solutions”. >>> (incorrect citation convention)
CORRECT:
The article “GPS Insight Can Meet ‘Out-of-The-Box’ Requirements” introduces ....
OR:
In the article “GPS Insight Can Meet ‘Out-of-The-Box’ Requirements”, the functionality, features, and benefits of GPS Insight, which primarily provides “asset and vehicle tracking solutions”, are introduced.
2) The article also stated... >>> (inconsistent verb tense usage: your first verb is in present tense)
3) the features of GPS Insight are “configurable and customizable” >>> I wonder what those features actually are. What can be customized and what can be configured?
4) Does GPS Insight meet ‘Out-of-The-Box’ requirements? >>> This is a rhetorical question. That seems conversational. It would be better just to present a statement: GPS Insight meets ‘Out-of-The-Box’ requirements in several ways.
5) to a large extend >>> (spelling) to a large extent
6) GPS insight are designed / GPS Insight collect >>> (subject verb disagreement)
7) data real time that users could be updated >>> (wrong verb form)
8) In an article on "The Evolution of Telematics" (Lauren Fletcher& Grace Suizo, February 2011). >>> (sentence fragment: incomplete sentence)
9) (Lauren Fletcher& Grace Suizo, February 2011). >>> (incorrect in-text citation convention)
10) Besides reducing the costs incurred by fuel usage and cost, it also shortens the time frame when the vehicle is stationary. >>> How does this product shorten the time frame that a vehicle is stationary? You need to explain. What makes this relevant in a comparison to GPS Insight?
11) Which will keep users constantly updated at a desired speed with the results they wanted. >>> (fragment)
12) One of the example >>> one of X, X must be plural, i.e. one of the boys, one of the products
13) products that wasnt mention >>> VERY SLOPPY LANGUAGE USE: subject-verb disagreement, spelling error, and wrong verb form
14) all of them serves
15) the same purpose which >>> (punctuation)
16) Your citation reference list items are not in APA style.
Let's work on this.